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Desire

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My life aches.
Too long has it been solo.
Neither giving;
Nor recieving.
I need someone.
I need someone to take me in.
Take me in and let me stop aching.
I am different;
for my desire is manned.
I must remain alone.
I must continue to ache.
This is something i wrote before i met my boyfriend.

Critique will be most welcome.
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raxephion's avatar
you should go write songs man! youve got the gift!